Beautiful fiction, really. I'm amazed. I remember seeing that episode, it was actually quite awkward. You did a very good job with it.

I would have liked to have seen more dialogue.

I don't see Daniels being attracted to Brenda, although it would certainly explain why she & Sergeant Gabriel are fighting. I wonder if he knows! LOL!! Actually, until recently, Gabriel has been one of the Chief's biggest supporters, so perhaps you're on to something here.

lol i loved it! i would have never pictured them together, but i love the way you did it wtg!