Ooh! I love angst!

God...I wish I could think of something to describe this. Hm. OH! LAME. I think that story would have been sad if you...hm...ACTUALLY MADE IT EMOTIONAL. I started laughing when you said that Jessie pulled out a pistol. I thought, "Oh great! This story is going to be even more retarded than it already is!" I mean, who actually would cry to this? If you do cry, oh well, but I personally don't see how any story this weird would be sad. I didn't feel and sadness ONCE. NEVER.

Desperately sad? Yeah, right. There was no real emotion in this story. I didn't know who half the characters were. The whole death thing was kind of lame and written too quickly to have any effect. And Ash's death? Shot in the heart? CLICHE (add the accent)! Also, after someone you love has been killed right in front of your eyes, do you really think you would just run away? I bet most people would try to kill the killer. Lastly, this not only applies to you, but I don't think any romantic fanfiction should be written about a cartoon with over-enthusiastic pre-teens and hyper animals that can only speak their names. Especially a cartoon made for children.

That was so sad! Continue soon!

MAKE A SEQUAL! MAKE A SEQUAL! I LOVE THIS STORY PULEASE MAKE A SEQUAL OR AT LEAST A NEW CHAPTER I DON'T CARE I JUST WANT 2 NO WAT HAPENS NEXT!
**Becky Lucinda**

My foreskin produces a green crusty mold every day of the year...oh, btw, your story sucked my ass nice and hard.

I HAVE READ SOME OF THE REVIEWS AND I WILL PERSONALY RIP THE BOLLOCKS OF ANYONE WHO SEND ANOTHER FLAME!

MURRAY:I...FOR..ONCE.I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY...

BOB:Wha!*Murray hands him a hanker chief*

MURRAY:HOW DO YOU DO IT? THIS IS BRILLIANT YOU HAVE HER FEELINGS PORTRAYED SO WELL YOU ARE WITH OUT A DOUBT A POKE FANFIC MASTER!

'sniff' i know how it feels to lose your friend and the one you love, it's happened twice. but she couldn't find the strength to live on in their memory. if misty had lived she could have done something with the rest of her life instead of throwing it away.

I know I lost my best friend Kurrie because of a drunk driver. Then the love of my life was shot. So this story flooded back memories. You are a great author. I know I didn't handle it well. It's hard to eat, you can't sleep, an you want to die, but you know they would want you to carry on, so that's how I felt. Keep writing though, you're a great author.

Seriously, that was sad. a way, you can understand it. I like it.

i liked your story it tells how love can be a friend and an emey

Ok. Too long, too sappy, way too dramatic, too mushy, too over-romantic, too idealistic, too much marrying, too bad.

this is the WORST fanfiction i have ever read in my life. fact is, i didnt even read it all, thank god, it was so bad

it was completely unrealistic

THIS SUCKS

YOU ARE EVIL! YOU *sniff* MADE ME CRY. ITS SO FUCKING SAD.