Lol! I love the ending! This was a great read. :)

Awesome job !

"Don't you know, darlin'" She asked as she withdrew, her accent sickeningly sweet. "That the police are allowed to lie during the course of an interrogation?" I was chuckling to myself the whole time !

Thank you! That was great! Please write more of these 2 lovely ladies.

My favorite. It was so real for me. I need more. Now.

aw now thats just cruel. hot but creul :D

Brilliant. This is gorgeously written, and very in character. I loved the banter, and the teasing was so hot, but the real clincher for me was the last line. Classic. Great job!