what a good story

I'm glad that James punched him. Gosh, this last chapter ahd me practically in tears, the bit about not having cried since he was five was especially shocking, as well as the reason for his tears then. Good job :)

I honestly feel the resolve here was reached to easily but it's your story and you wrote it well.

I liked this chapter much more than the first one. You show Sirius in a slightly better light before the fight with Snape.

You're good at writing dialog and both the fight with Snivellus and the reasons it escalated like it did are believable. I also feel the conversation with James at the end is spot on.

I must say that your Sirius is even more callus than usual. You have a realistic view of the way teenaged boys think and talk though.

this is the favourite version of this subplot i have read thus far. and i have read alot, lol. very well handled and the riht touch of everything x

That was really great! Not many stories show how the Marauders reacted to what he did. I like the ending in particular. Great job.

I'm glad you didn't have him planning it, just an offhand thing he didn't think about. yay for the double post!

I like how you had James as Remus' protector here. And Sirius' breakdown made me get all teary. Lovely fic. Thanks for sharing it.

Fantastic. Really enjoyed this.

This is very sweet. I've always wondered about the specifics concerning what happened when Sirius told Snape about the passage under the Whomping Willow. Good job!

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This is very sweet.

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aha this is interesting so far. i would like very much to see how it plays out

Wow, it's going to be interesting to see this from Sirius' point of view. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Wonderful start! I love cheeky Remus: "Remus starts to snicker. “It's not like you tripped and fell into her...and then out of her...and then into her...again.”

I was wondering though - how DO you accidentally sleep with someone? :-)

I loved your humour through this and the interaction between Remus and Sirius was natural and flowed beautifully. I can't wait to read more and hope the next update is coming soon.