I love this story please make a sequel!

Honestly, I liked the way this story turned out. I liked it a lot. Yeah, I had to think for a few minutes to remember this was the story where she had singing lessons in the beginning, but I wouldn't change anything of this because it was actually really amazing! I hope you find it in your heart to somehow continue this, I loved it!

Let me start off by saying that I really enjoyed your writing style and the story itself. It had me up late reading just to finish it (on a school night no less), I enjoyed the story that much. I had a lot of fun with the fact that Seiya was in love with his princess and Usagi (though they are technically one in the same) and the way everyone was bothering him about falling for Usagi because he had the princess without realizing that everything was alright. It was all so much fun, and had me on the anxiously awaiting what would happen next. You also managed to keep them mostly in character, which is always a bonus in my book - especially when the characters are set in an alternate reality.

I have to say, though, that I was a bit disappointed by the ending. The story had so much build up and so many complex problems and relationships that needed to be set straight, and I was really looking forward to how you were going to do that (what you were going to do about the Mamoru/Usagi/Seiya love triangle, Rei's crush on Seiya, etc). The way you ended it though, just killing off Usagi and Seiya then, essentially, resetting it by having it a new life without solving any of the old problems was a let down, and I do believe you could've done that much better (especially with the way you managed to build it all up) though I will admit having the fact that she could sing well come back up as the way they met again was cute. After reading the author's note, I understand that this was, initially, written on a whim, but I still believe the ending could've been better.

Either way, great job overall on the story, I really did enjoy it.

Who's payment was who's. One was Xavier and the other that he killed was who? Mamoru?

You can always do both versions. :)

Nicely done, I'm glad a part of them remembers and they can finally be happy together. :)

I would like to read the prologue you mentioned that said it could be found somewhere, but the link does not show. :(

OOh this could be bad.

Oh, Kaoraan is going to be so mad!

I'm glad they got to spend some time together. I say take the deal, so he can escape with her.

I'm glad she finally told him, yay!

She was a quick thinker :)

I'm glad she got to see Seiya again, there's hope! yay! :)

I'm glad Yaten and Minako are so happy together. :) I'm curious to see what happens when Rei leaves with Seiki. :)

I wonder if she got the hint when they mentioned the princess with seiya, hehe. Time for Mars to back off. :P lol, I may be more possessive then the characters, haha