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Reviews for: Don't Lose It
Jake-X
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
It's really nice to see a softer side of Gem, and the brotherly bond between him and Shad is really well done in this, kudos to you.
bluesonic115
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
Wow, I usually don't read fics with fan characters, but this was amazing!
Dark Maelstrom
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
That was pretty crazy! Poor Gemini, the thing that added a new dimension to his life was now destroying him, and now he's lost almost everything. This story was pretty tragic, and you should have posted this up a whil ago; its pretty awesome!

DS92
CrazyNutSquirrel
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
This was nice, sad, but nice, and Gemini, I never actually thought he'd loosen up, for anyone. You should have posted this long ago! It's a story I can read when I want something to cry over, or realize how lucky I am to be mortal.
SragonZ
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
Poor Gemini! T^T
Such a sad story *sniffle*
AnimeQueen17
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
This story is so sad,yet really well writen. It pulled at my heart strings a little. It shall remain in my faves forever!
SexyShadowGirl
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
Man... I seriously got depressed after reading this story.:( I'm not saying I don't like it though. It was just different for a change since I'm usually not reading sad stories like this (save for bluemage's story where Tails dies), but I must admit, it was very well written and flowed through just the way it should. So cheers!^^ Also, I felt so bad for Gemini in this fic, except I couldn't help but wonder who his wife was.^^; And of course Ciel crying is so cute.^^xp Oh, and the part where Gemini was blaming himself for his wife's death totally reminded me of when Shadow lost Maria. But I guess that's how anyone would feel if they just lost someone they loved. And I'm guessing Gemini's wife died of old age or something since you mention that part at the end about immortals and how it's harder for them to deal with death.

Overall I'd say that you did a really good job on this, so I thankful that you decided to post this.:)

Hope ta hear from ya soon.

~Caro;)
crimson-obsidian-rose
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Gemmi! That was so sad, and so freakin emotional, poor guy. But despite that, this is a good read, especially since we got to see a side of both brothers we never got to see before, and you did a nice job portraying it. And, of course, Ciel was being Ciel, which was nice to see again.

And the way you described Gemini going insane, that was powerful and seemed so real, it actually frightened me. Please, don't go insane Gemmi!

But in the end, it's a nice piece, and well written!

Rose

(P.S.: You even managed to make Silhouette pity Gemini, good job. Though I must admit for her, she doesn't hate him that much, not really. And now I shall run for my life from her wrath, bye!)
Pokelad
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
Aw...now I wanna cry...*sniff*
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