LOVE IT! Sorry, I am attracted to dark tragedy like a moth to a candle flame. That sounded odd...

This seems pretty cool. I love the originality.

This is a very god story. I love the dark theme. You should definitely write more fics like this.

wow that was intense, good but intense!

WoW! that was great!! i luved it!! i mean it was very well written and it had a great plot line. and of course the fact that it was a zutara helped just alittle ;)

Wow.
Wow.
You weren't kidding about the dark. Interesting take on twisting Romeo and Juliet. We had to read that in English once and this sort of makes sense. They were part of warring groups and still fell in love and then one committed suicide when they thought the other was dead(except in this case, it was two years later and they were dead).

Oh, and I saw the Princess Bride references. I love that book! I memorized To the Pain and presented it as a book project in English one year.(oddly enough, the same year we read Romeo and Juliet)

Anyway, I like Zutara and I've never seen this happen before. It was really different and I guess I liked it. Great job!