Aw! That was OVERLY sweet! LoL! Good Job with the leaf thing...

WOW, that was very cool. u had sum really cool ideas in this and it was extremely original. ive read a lot of fics where they have been saying the same thing about abby and carter and u had that at the heart of the piece while making it so different and very effective. ok i sound strange, i promise im not THAT weird. anyways loved the piece.

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Great Job! A very sweet, compelling story. Write more. :o)

Good start. Add more!

interesting story... Carby-ness bounds! Good job. Nice little thing with the title. If only it weren't too good to be true...

Very mystical and mysterous for me, liked that aspect of it. "One flew away in a plane and the other flew away on angel wings," is a great line. Top job :)