Love it!
OMG IS THERE GOING TO BE ANOTHER THE HOST!?
If there is YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY :D :D
If not :( boohoo :'(
Love it! Awesome :D
-x-

This is...bad. Too tired to go into it. Spam away.

I think this story has a really good start to it. I just think that it may need longer chapters. But otherwise, I think it's a good story. I have a small idea that might help you get more into your story, and I was wanting to see how the story would turn out if you went with it. Well, I was thinking that the Soul they found should have a more significant role in this story. Especially since it's titled "The Soul". You could make it to where the other soul's group finds them, and since he doesn't have someone in his mind controlling him, he could fall in love with Wanda. I think that, that would be a pretty interesting mix up between Ian, Wanda, and the other Soul. But that's just a suggestion, so you don't have to go with that. I'm sure however way you decide to go with this story, it'll turn out great! (: Have fun! And add more soon, please!

interesting story, but the chapters are really short.

I love it, it's really good. But in the host, didnt melanie say she was over jared :/?

I really like your grammar, and everything's flowing on pretty well.

By the 2nd chapter, I think that you should beknowing in which direction the fanfic should be heading. Also, you chapters could be a little longer.
I also feel that you're not really getting nito the characters as well as you could have.

Good luck!

I think you have a decent writing style, um, do you still want a beta reader? If you do I'm available. You certainly need some plot. the story's just kind of going... PM me if you want me to e your beta.

I love it please write more

I like it. keep going

I just wanted to review because this is a fantastic story! I also wanted to offer my Beta Reader services. I have a Beta reader profile and I love the Host, and I would definetely like to Beta read a story for it.
Anyway, this is a brilliant story! Thanks for writing it!

I like your story so far :) Though I'm not sure where you found more information on the Host. (where did you find the info because I can't find it anywhere on Stephenie Meyer's web site not even under The Host tab) As far as I knew it was just going to be one book. Anyway your story is very good so far but I think you should try some more description and if you wanted to sound a little more like Stephenie Meyer you should try to re-read the novel Host and note how she writes :) Anyway the story is very good so far :) Update soon :)

aww that was really cute=D

I just wish that they were longer...

i'm sorry, but i'm afraid i have to tell u that this chap wasn't as good as the alst one...you should make chaps longer and watch out 4 ur spelling and i have also seen an odd tense or 2... well..that's not too bad...but remember that the story looks nicer when there are no spelling mistakes!
you also said in ur A/N that you needed help. well to make the story more interesting you could do a bit of forbidden jared/wanda.something like that, look:
after a raid where sunny and wanda bring a lot of things to celebrate jeb's b-day, they do a party in the caves. jared get's drunk, and goes to wanda telling her that he loved her and that sort of stuff. She believes it because she had never seen a drunk guy, so she didn't think that jared was. ther is a moment where neither jaimie, mel, nor iar are there, so jared takes her to the dark room whre they do the washing and leaves her pregnant. later in the story she finds out and tells him. but he isn't ready to tell mel or to take care of his new child. so she tells ian and he forgives her, that's where she finds out who is the right one 4 her... if u like it let me know (if u don't let me know too, i wanted to do some jared-wanda in my story, but this thing just came to me right now... like a light of inspiration!:):):))
OK hope i 've been helpful, or at least that i gave you 1 or 2 ideas...!
crazyalmu007!!

it's a great start, keep it up! but make your chaps longer in order to ger a real meyer's like writing, but anyways it's a very good way to start. I'm trying to write my own host ff and i don't have any ideas of how i can start it! but yours is good! and the title is also great!! I'm glad you told me that meyer was going to write 2 more books! cant wait 4 it!
Please... don't let wanda fall 4 burns... i would be devastated...but you can let burns fall 4 her! that would be interesting!and i also like the fact that wanda is still feeling jaleous about jared and mel!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! If u need help of u re out of ideas i'll be keen to help in such an interesting story!
crazyalmu007!

THEY SHOULD HAVE A BABY. :p