C'mon and get Dawn and Freak together already!

Hurray for Freak! Hey lady lore likes wolfbane, not freak so get lore away from freak! I like Dawn with freak better :)

Nice chapter. This is an awesome story, but is it over? I hope not. Anyway keep up your great writing.

aww, in the middle of a action packed fight? any way you need more awesome so please Make new soon (but don't rush/force it)

Great story, so far, I'm realy slow reader so i'm realy late on this review

I'm likin' it. Keep on going.

Nice story! Please update sooner <3 It's a swell story! Love it. Wondering what's going to happen next.

Update soon! I love this chappy! All the action! And i loved it when freak killed that crony! he didnt have to feel bad about it!

P.S. all my sentences ended with an exclamation mark! :D

Bob?! Like, Tehn00bshow Bob? The guy from youtube videos who always calls people noobs?! That guy?
Now that is awesome. I can see why he became Lord Luxon's pet n00b.

Fantastic story! Please update!

I have no time to read until the last chapter but all I can say is it's a good story. I'll continue reading later.

DO U KNOW HOW LONG I WANTED TO REVIEW FOR?!?!?!?!?(i have no account) ur style of story writing along with your experience of runescape makes a perfect match. The couple is made better with your endless imagination. k review completed

Well, Wolfbane joining Freak's army? That was unexpected... but cool. Hopefully his defection is partly due to morals... he does have morals, right? Lord Luxon couldn't possibly have shot off all his morality...

Luxon was a good guy?! Lady Lore likes Wolfbane?! That's really uncalled for, but some good chapters indeed! Keep up the good work!

Woah... THAT was really unexpected...