Love the story DUDE!Great homor.One of my fav stories when they get to together.Peace out DUDE!

Nice!

I must say that this story was definetly entertaining. Shego training Drakken...hadn't thought of it before, but it's actually a great idea! (Think I might use it in one of my episodes!) Anyways, the personality of these characters is something that I love to see develop throughout the course of a story, and this was no exception. Props to you for being a good author!

Aww...now it's over! :( I'm not sure if I've ever read a DS fic where the characters stay as in-character as you always manage to keep them. It's fantastic.

Also, big thanks for keeping the nerd humor to a minimum this time around.

BLOOP!

Wow. This has got to be the most intimate moment between Drakken and Shego, on an emotional level that is. I am really empressed with how that moment was written. Excellent job! Terry Steinfeld?? You make me laugh. AND HOORAY FOR KISSY FACE!

liked when yje plant bonked their heads together.

That was supposed to be "aw" as in, 'how romantic, and kinda sweet, but in the good way' :) . After I submitted the review, it seemed unclear.

This chapter turned out great.
'Geektastic'...cute :)
"What, like pie?" Why does that make me smile?
And when he 'got' her suggestion, and reacted to it the way he did...aw.
And like I said, I really like the way you've dealt with Drakken and his plant powers.
And there's the hint that, with his new powers and a bit of fighting ability, and her taking an interest in the 'business', sometime they might actually succeed. (No, I don't mean in another chapter! I mean...in my mind!).

Glad my suggestions were helpful, too ;) Happy to do it anytime!
Charlotte

Wow... This had to be the most romantic D/S chapter I've ever read. In it's own little way though. I couldn't stop smiling dreamily when Shego wanted to go to school for something Drakken is a wiz at. I must've looked freaking pathetic. :P Great job. Great story. :)

Loved it. Especially loved the final kick in the shin ^_^

Hi...just me :)

It's so nice to see Drakken and Shego laughing and having fun together...and it was nice to see Dr. D have a little success.

The fight scene was intense, and there are some surprises there (I won't give them away here).

I love competent! intimidating! evil! Dr. D...but I especially like him at the end of the chapter, when he is confident and happy.

Something I haven't mentioned, too, is that I like the chapter titles...very clever.

And...you used somehting I said as a Shego line! I can die happy now!

So...just looking forward to the next chapter now. ;)

Charlotte

i'm alittle miffed about the torturing of the hamster too. torture human if you want (cartoon one) but i can't bear the thought of hurt animals (even cartoon one).

i was hoping for a liitle more win for draken that several good punchs. oh well...

"What she was not used to was somebody looking at her as if she was sugar and spice and everything nice and the greatest thing since that huge outlet sale on annihilation rays.
“You’re the best, Shego!” Drakken exclaimed joyfully"
yea they kissed ! :)

I lol'd at "POW! BANG! BIFF!" Adam West would've approved.

And now we're going to take a drive down Romantic Tension Lane! wo!!

Wonderful! God, I was actually getting a little nervous right before the Kp/Drakken showdown. I was really hoping he'd be alright. Great chap!

Ninnik,

This was indeed one funny chapter. I loved the reactions of Tony and Mr. 'Big Fun'. Be that as it may, Drakken may get more than what he anticipated when he tries kidnapping Ron.

Shego may or may not have his back on this. That may be an internal struggle you might want to explore in the next chapter. Either way, it was just a suggestion.

Seriously, though, I always pictured Shego as having a great singing voice. This would have been especially true for songs along the lines of Blondie, Pat Benatar, or (for more contemporary tastes) Pink.

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird

Extremely funny chapter, especially Drakken's bathroom excuse. You rock!!