Me thinks me like. I really love how you added in the 525,600 minutes in there, it gave your story a subtle grace to her death. It was a bit rushed, but still very good.

May I just say that your descriptions in this story were wonderful, and so much to the point that you could actually see the grief of everyone, and want to give poor Roger a giant hug.

One question though: Where's Mark? I don't think I saw him mentioned once.