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Agent Malkere
2009-12-01 . chapter 3
Yeah! ALL HAIL TOPH GOD AND SAINT JUN! ...or else!

Fantabulous story! *virtual glomp* Have I mentioned that I love you lately? ;P

~Agent Malkere
Aces and Eights
2009-11-15 . chapter 3
ha ha, that was great! I got confused a lot on who was talking sometimes, but I still loved it!
zutaraandtaang4ever
2009-08-05 . chapter 3
Your story was awesome! Operation Epic Zutara = win!
bloodyrose1294
2009-08-02 . chapter 3
That must have been so awkward for Sokka! lol!!
Miss Katara x
2009-08-01 . chapter 3
I don't know whether to class this story as hilarious, sweet or just plain horrific. The Zutara WAS epic.
Anyway it was pretty funny getting Aang drunk and all LOL
Miss Katara x
PnayBabyGurl
2009-06-19 . chapter 3
Hahaha omg the ending was both squee-worthy and hilarious! Awesome job. :) I couldn't agree more with Suki and Haruhi, "Operation: Epic Zutara is a complete success!" <3 Hehe

Keep writing!

-Mina
Monito
2009-06-11 . chapter 3
WONDERFUL!
i really loved it
ur a great writer
the perspective you gave zuko of katara and the way you described his love for her just re-inspired my zutara love
FIRE LADY OREN
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
This is pure genious...like the way it's written!
azure orbis
2009-03-04 . chapter 3
"Damn straight" is all I have to say for Toph's assessment and break down of Aang's attachment to Katara! I mean, he saved the world for her, so *of course* she should reward him with her love. And let's all pretend that she never asked for time to think or whatever, and that he kissed her without asking or warning, and completely expects her to go along with what he wants! You hit the nail on Aang's selfishness and inability to see past what he wants to see. And you even wove Guru Pathik in there! That guru knew his stuff and his weird trance-inducing potions too. What was it, banana-onion?

Loved the reappearance of the Cave of Two Lovers- always felt it suited Zutara better than Katara and Aang. Speaking of which, you actually incorporated the "Zutara" shipping label into the fic and placed it rather reasonably there by having Suki and Toph explain to clueless Sokka. That is pure win. And Toph as Melon Lord and her awesome nicknaming and scheming was amazing. Her voice was written in a perfectly sublime way that I could hear her in. I love her as a mastermind and if there was a continuation of Avatar, I would hope it was this animated. Oh and much joy in hearing the phrase "You rise with the moon, I raise with the sun!" It was like seeing S1 and having the promise of Zutara all over again...And congrats on combining comedy with really serious moments about Zuko, his change and the driving forces behind so much of the ships.

Did I mention I liked your Suki so much more? She's much more awesome here, than in S3 where she just becomes Sokka's girlfriend without much anything else about her. I prefer her and Toph making fun of Sokka. It was pleasure to read this!
sweet-impact
2009-02-01 . chapter 3
HARUHI AND KYON TRAVELLED BACK IN TIME?! Wow lol
LOVE THE CROSSOVER =D

Whoa, Zuko and Katara...lol. Yay for them finally getting together~! Awesome job on this fic, it was funny and romantic =D
Star Angel Sirius
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
Penguin puppy eyes??
I'm glad Mai is grown up enough to see how Zuko has changed, even when he can't see it him self.
Anonymous
2008-12-15 . chapter 3
That was so funny and good! You should write a sequel!
Gilraen Narmolanya
2008-11-27 . chapter 3
This was hilarious! Toph is some great schemer! She's darned awesome!

Sokka, as always, is hilarious.

CAUGHT IN THE ACT = WIN!
Yemi Hikari
2008-11-22 . chapter 3
It took a few clicks before I realized that you had crossed the Meloncholly of Haruhi in here... and then... it REALLY clicked... this was awsume!
Eicklehart
2008-11-11 . chapter 3
I LOVED THIS! I LOVED IT! YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE ZUTARA, THIS IS AMAZING AND WONDERFUL AND AWESOME! oh my gosh ... calming down. okay ... i really like how when you write, you have a kind of commentary in brackets, which gives more insight into the character. its really well written and it makes your story much better.
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