Very nicely done!!

OKAY I'M GOING TO GIVE THIS FNFICTIIOSDFNS SJFA WHO GIVES A ** ABOUT TYPOS ANYHOW? I'LL TELL YOU NOT ME ANYWAY I GIVE THIS 10/10 THIS WAS BRILLIANT BEAUTIFUL AND IT MADE ME PEE A LITTLE YOKO ONO KILLED THE BEATLES

I LOVE CATS AND...YOKO AND...I LOVE YOU! WILL YOU MARRY ME? BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. AND I THINK YOUR SUPER SEXY ! LETS HAVE 10 KIDS 1 BOY AND 9 GIRLS. LO5995929LETS NAME THWEM BOOBS AND BOB AND BOOBIE BOB AND YOUR A UGLY REATARD. J SAUIHFIUSGVFDKJBCKJAS N KLJFHSHIFJSKA STOPOPI TIITITITITITITITITITTITIITITITITITITITITITITITITITI


OKAY ILU SEE YOU TOMORROW SXC ; )

LOVE,
~*~*~*~JATHERINE~*~*~*~

I think it would be more interesting if Rossiu--instead of restating what takes place in the plot step by step--actually interacted with someone. Or you could have SHOWN Rossiu going through what he went through rather than STATING the events through his own words in the past tense.