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Reviews for: Spiral Soliloquy
Meyrinn
2009-02-04 . chapter 1
Very nicely done!!
Jatherine
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
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I LOVE CATS AND...YOKO AND...I LOVE YOU! WILL YOU MARRY ME? BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. AND I THINK YOUR SUPER SEXY ! LETS HAVE 10 KIDS 1 BOY AND 9 GIRLS. LO5995929LETS NAME THWEM BOOBS AND BOB AND BOOBIE BOB AND YOUR A UGLY REATARD. J SAUIHFIUSGVFDKJBCKJAS N KLJFHSHIFJSKA STOPOPI TIITITITITITITITITITTITIITITITITITITITITITITITITITI


OKAY ILU SEE YOU TOMORROW SXC ; )

LOVE,
~*~*~*~JATHERINE~*~*~*~
Cal reflector
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
I think it would be more interesting if Rossiu--instead of restating what takes place in the plot step by step--actually interacted with someone. Or you could have SHOWN Rossiu going through what he went through rather than STATING the events through his own words in the past tense.
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