This is really good :)
There needs to be more good Rose fics
Keep up the good work
x

It's pretty good, well done!=)

~Ivy~

...I'm speechless. I want to write my own Rosalie story now. This was beautiful. Though it was short, you managed to use the language flawlessly to create something moving. This draws the reader in and won't let them go, and I do believe it has left a mark.

Wonderful job. Good luck writing!

-Hikari

Hi. I love your story, and I agree with you that Rosalie needs a lil' more loving. I love how you wrote about Rosalie watching Bella, and when Edward or Alice comes into the room, what she thinks changes. You've depicted Rosalie as I think of her, love it.