Yeah, so very, very 'mature'. Stupid girls a-giggling, leather clad Sirius a-strutting, shabby Remus a-wangsting, despised Peter a-snoring... I'd have a hard time coming up with a cliché (or an offensive stereotype, while we're at it) this story didn't employ. I don't care it was written ten years ago, unimaginative's unimaginative.

The writing isn't anything special, either, the storyline – as simple as it is – was due to the poor execution confusing as hell (eg. one moment is Remus wearing a nightshirt and apparently nothing underneath, the next there's “fumbling with pants, yanking off shirts”?). Oh, also – what are they? Gay, straight, bi? I honestly couldn't tell.

Sorry to be so negative, but I couldn't help myself. This was about the worst SB/RL I've read in years. :(

I think I like this one better than the other ; That might be because I like Sb/Rl better :D

But those country girls annoy me, ha-ha ;D

Wow... Intense!

Loved it ,

Even almost 7 years since you wrote this, it is still one of the very best "get together" fics for this pairing ever! Your writing is sure and mature. I also especially liked that you maintain the masculinity of both boys. I wish there was a bit of a break between the scenes though because it's disconcerting in a couple of places.

I like how you described inside the curtains as their own little universe, however, it seemed a bit random when they started to snog. One minute Sirius was apologising for the date, and the next he's mounting him. I'm not saying I didn't enjoy it; I simply felt that it was rather rushed.

Aww, now that's good! I did enjoy that. Remus was so funny there...

x Cazzy x

Yum. :)

Definitely better than the other version. Great job.

hmm. I do like this one better...but that may just come from my biased mind (I've always preferred slash _). I noticed a few changes and touch-ups you made though. Very nice.

Both versions were good, but I think I like this one the best.

sweet, I loved it!

love,

TJP

m S/R slashyness! WOO HOO! loved it dude
cheers!
-PDL-

ooh! i like it wen remy goes all wolfy! great story!

I enjoyed this a whole bunch... I agree with you, Silver Thorn! I read the first version, expected it to be slash and while it was good, was a bit disappointed. I like this version better :)

Coo! D