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HP-GW-Shipper
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
M.. I think Ginny's character is a bit off. Not by much though.
loveisthegreatestmagic
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
I loved this part

"You're a git."

He chucked quietly, "That I am."

She looked up at him, a hopeful expression on her face. "But you're my git right?"

it just cracked me up.
AllIWannaDo
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. Truly. Might have even replaced Altered Perception as my favorite one-shot of yours. I'm so glad I read it! :)
I could really empathize with Ginny's need to keep herself together for the sake of her friends and family, as well as Harry's concern for her: your writing was emotional without being overdone. I almost cried at the end - some well-deserved Harry/Ginny fluff there ("But you're my git, right?") hehe. Excellent work!
Keep writing!
nightwing27
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
nice story
Grandad
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
I enjoyed that very much. I think you got the characters just right.
LordSalvador
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
really great :)
Team-Emmett-Cullen-Fan
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
aww like your story, well done
Kitty Bridgeta
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
This is a really good story!
It was really sweet, and showed the emotions of both characters brilliantly.
well done. :)
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