this was great i loved it. aldo im not a fan of Pedmund this was a good fic oh and dont listen to those flamers (sons of a ###). you are great. i ot flamed too on my story but that did not stop me from doing something i love.

i ord to all flamers!

DONT LIKE IT, DONT READ IT

you just wasted her time on sending her the flames!

natalie xxxxxx

keep moving forward !

great story again?

will we find out who she is?

stupid people

don't read it if u just goin to dis it, make it creative, not just because it ''wrong''

just need to finish the last battle, i love Narnia

I thought this was very gd! Its nice to read something very different then wot is normally done and i enjoyed readin it!

So dont listen to people who flame, they just dont ave anything better to do with there sad lifes!

Flamers, don't you have anything else to do?

If this isn't your cup of tea, why the hell do you read it?

Dumbasses.

I thought this story was absolutely AMAZING.

you know, reading this for the second time didnt change my view of your awesomeness at all! LOL

glad you posted this here.

oh, and ignore the bloody flamers. if they had guts, they would have signed in before they thrashed this brilliant fic.

Nice two-shot. The tone Edmund's 'confession' got across to me was that he felt pretty sorry for himself, but it WOULD be kind of impossible to write it as his thoughts, since this is in the point of view of the girl.

And ignore the flames. If people don't like this sort of thing, why do they always take the time to read it? Ugh...

This is dark. Very dark. I guess that's your intent so if it is you got it across. I don't like the Peter/Edmund thing though.

that was, good in a way. but you totally killed edmund pevensie. yh, he felt guilty and was mean and all, but he changed in the end for the better, didn't he?

This is sick. chilling, but sick.

Your conscience must be totally dead. If you had ANY sense of right and wrong, you wouldn't be posting this perverted crap.

Thanks for totally decimating the books of my childhood. For Aslan's sake, keep your smutty trash out of Narnia and go invade someone else's fandom.

Well, that was just plain sick. Why on earth would you want to post something that's so offensive on so many levels?

I. hate. your. guts.

You sick, perversed, evil, unholy son of a *.

How DARE you bring this * into the Edmund archive? The Peter, Susan and Caspian archives are completely trashed, must you take down Edmund with them!

You suck.

No writing talant, complete and absolute wreckage to such a beloved masterpiece created by Jack, and you bring a popular American ritual into it all.

You bastard.

Get out.