I really enjoyed this story. Anything to get Kavanaugh his comeuppance is worth reading!

love them! so very much!

lmao

i love McKay

Kavanaugh is a douche.

Oh man... I was laughing so hard.

Never ever tick off a genius when they are trapped in your mind *chuckles*

ooh, good one!

Kav sure got what he deserved for pulling such a stunt on poor Rodney :P

haha. That's cute! Very charming, I must say. I like it!

Had to pause hear to say that I love it so far! I knew Kavanaugh was evil. LOL. Can't wait to see where this goes!

Oh that was just too funny for words. You really captured McKay in all his brilliant wonderful snarkyness.

When John started to notice something was wrong I was on the edge of my seat waiting for him to figure it out.

Chapter 3 was pure genius, I never laughed so much at all the things McKay did to annoy Kavanaugh. And then there was the finale, with Rodney's evil revenge, where he tricks Kavanaugh into thinking he is actually going to carry out number 11 (promoted to 3).

More please?

nice :)

I enjoyed the way you wrote Rodney in Kavanaugh's head. You did a good job with the supporting characters as well. Nicely done!

The snarking and methods McKay came up with to annoy Kavanaugh throughout were very, very funny. They made for a fun read. How did Kav end up in the holding cells, though? That was not made clear.

HAHAHAHAHAHHA! I am seeing the final scene in my head, and laughing so hard it hurts! Imagine Kavanaugh waking to that sight, then death number eleven that had been bumped to number three! HAHAHAHAHA! I can imagine him landing and Caldwell staring in utter confusion at his terror! Sweet sweet story! Loved it!

Ah poor poor Kavanaugh. Not that I pity him at all. No, far from it. You might want to change the status to complete though. Btw, isn't mind meld a Star Trek reference (points to vulcans)?

You’ll what...? If I can make a suggestion I reckon a gun to the head, that’ll teach me.

That was so funny! Go Rodney. Give em hell!

Keep up the good work.