Wonderful!
this is really good!
It is kind of confusing if ya don't pay attention
but .. that might be just me ...
^ ^
very awesome writing style too!

Oh so wonderfully done!!

The fact that you combined Naruto and Inuyasha together so effortlessly is such a feat on it's own it's truly amazing!
Everything seemed to be fit perfectly even the way the premonitions hit the poor blond!
I could literally see this in my mind's eye! It truly is wonderful to be able to let the words form that which we can only think of! LOL

It was wonderfully done! I look forward to when you update again, BUT at your own pace!

Great job and keep it up!

Laters!

Ja'Ryse