this was so great!! you need to work on the grammar and spelling but other than that . . . great plot!!

the plot is great but your grammar and stuff like that is off. But overall not bad

omg! that was a great fanfic!:) its one of the few that ive read right to the end, usually the storys get boring but yours has been great from the very first chapter:)

hollyjonas101

THE END! NOO (throughs laptop out of the window...remembers Laptop has access to Fanfiction...jumps right after it)

a wonderfull ending for a wonderfull story! enjoyed every single chapter to the very last word!! ^_^

hope to read one of your new stories soon ^_^

LilyXJames ^_^

hey, thank you for a great story

hey, great new chapter, i really like it

cute scene at the hospital ^_^

update soon! ^_^

I seriously love this fic, there are so many little twist its hard to know what to expect next! Can't wait for another update!

OH COME ON! THAT IS NOT FAIR! it just keeps getting better and better! please tell me that you are going to update soon!

i love how you make Michael and Sara's love so cute! and innocent ^_^

can't wait for the next chapter ^_^

LilyXJames

hey, great new chapter, i really like it

hey, great new chapter, i really like it

I hope you update soon! That is a horrible place to leave a chapter! maybe its the boss to the resue? Or Sucre? Who knows... well you do, which is why you should update ASAP!

why do that to us lol
please update really soon and since next week i'll be in the middle of nowhere so i ownt get internet access make it good lol
btw great chapter xoxo

hey, great new chapter, i like it, poor sara

What away to end this chapter!

Can't wait for more!