I think it's good.

How could you forge cocoa pebbles?I hear a sequel coming!

Good and interesting story. I don't think it was stupid I think it was cool. I was gonna say. What about Cocoa Pebbles? I also don't see why Barney would be so mad. Because he just said "Let's make cereal." He never said what it would look, smell, or taste like. He didn't even say it would be called "Fruity Pebbles" or that it would even be made of fruit. He surley has some anger issues.

lol rofl funny!

not bad :)

it was pretty good, i think you did the story perfectly except for (Fred couldn't take this cereal stealing anymore. The night before his big commercial, he packed his bags and left Bedrock.)

you could of ended it like (Wilma and Betty were proud of both of them, but little did they know that they weren't doing this out of friendship. A few years rolled by and Fruity Pebbles was still on top. Barney had felt terrible after that and he felt that he made his friend mad. Eventually Barney confessed to Wilma and Betty that he was trying to get back at Fred for stealing his idea.

Fred never lied again and they all lived happily ever after sort of.

THE END)

No wonder Barney was always stealing Fruity Pebbles, he knew Fred had stolen them from him first!

Well I admit that this isn't the best thing I've written. I was just bored. I hate being stuck at home. Now I'm back in school finally.

I was searching for something different and I found this gem... Off-the-Wall in a cute way!