Oh - that last line gave me the shivers. They'll never know...
Brilliant story - look forward to reading more of your stuff - thank you!

*-Sal-* xx

Oeh exciting! I can really picture The Joker standing there with the cops finding al those knifes in his pockets *snicker* Keep on writing! Please add more chapters soon!

this was such an awesome story :D i loved it
did he have her lipstick in his sewed pocket?

im a bit confused about why harleys dead but im sure ull claer that up! THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME I LOVE IT!

I just want you to know this may be the single greatest thing ever. It made me sob. A lot. Especially at the end. I just...ugh! He was so sweet and funny and surprising. And he and Harley were so cute! And then...and then...*starts sobbing again* But it all made such perfect sense that I couldn't deny that any of it happened. Great story. I loved it. It completed my image of the Joker.

By the way, do you mind if I use the idea of the Joker singing that Steve Miller Band song in my own story? It was such a great idea, and I can totally see him singing it. If you want to check out my story it's called "Demolition Lovers".

You're a genious for this story though. Absolutely stunning story. I need to stop rambling...But I loved the story.

oh man,
i never thought it was going to end like that! crazy twist. :]

it's really sad though! D':

Aww the ending is so sad! Are you going to write more? I'd like to read about how he'll turn into The Joker after Harley died. I think you did great job!

That...was...fabulous...just thought you should know :)

I like the way you've managed to change The Joker's personality in those first few lines - you can really see the break down of his personality.
Very sad :( - hope you write another soon though!

O - uh oh :-S
Our Will's not a happy bunny! Bless him - he's all protective ^_^

Can't wait to read more!

Excellent ^_^ especially the father-pencil incident - got his practice in early, lol ;)

i absolutely love this story!! it is amazing! please update!

Pure Excellence!

'“I win,” he flashes me a grin before retreating at top speed.'

I love this chapter - it's so lovely!!

More, more, more!! Lol!

nice

Oh wow!! this is so cool - seeing The Joker like this is really interesting! Sad too :-( Is he telling the truth though?

Update soon!