 Windy Rein 2008-09-30 . chapter 2:) In honour of the good ol' times :) Meaning the times that I was obsessed with this pairing xD
Anyways, it was good :) I liked very much :) The timeline didn't even seem rushed and I don't know how you managed that since usually this long of a time in two chapters feels WAY too rushed :D
The bottom line is, I like this :) |
 jtsbbsps-dk 2008-08-12 . chapter 2 That was a really sweet story, thanks for posting it! :D |
 Shadow 2008-08-10 . chapter 2 I liked the 1st chapter a lot... enough that if I had an account I would have put the story on my favorites list... however... the second chapter just ruined it.
The idea itself is good, but being crammed into 1 chapter just didn't work. Actually, if you took the ideas in both chapters and extended it- add more details, not blur the time line together with things like 'months passed' or 'years passed'- I think the whole thing could be an awesome story.
Overall though, this seems like more of an outline =/ |
 Leon 2008-08-10 . chapter 2 Very sweet story! I liked it! |
 SwarmOfFanGirls 2008-08-09 . chapter 2Aww, sweet XD
From Me x |
 SwarmOfFanGirls 2008-08-08 . chapter 1:O Aww, poor Harry :(
From Me x |