 enviousxbeauty 2009-09-09 . chapter 1That was nice. Great job! |
 SumthinWicked 2009-09-08 . chapter 1I love this! I must say that everytime I review your stuff but I do! Sap galore isn't the word. I love Caleb! especially when the boys are younger.
I actually read this when you first posted but I forgot to review. How bad of me lol anywho great job! now im off to read the new installment! =D |
 Emi-Ly Sway 2009-07-03 . chapter 1I loved caleb in this C= it's all good honestly, thanks |
 bhoney 2009-04-09 . chapter 1I really liked this one. I loved your portrayal of young Sam, especially in the bathroom scene. It rang so true, he seemed just like a flesh-and-blood kid. Loved his excitement over going to school.
Adored the idea of Dean doing the word-a-day thing with Sam, and teaching him stuff so he'd be at the head of his class when he entered school, trying to make sure Sammy had everything he needed to be successful. That is so sweet, and so Dean. And it was so touching and heart-wrenching that Dean sold his baseball cards to do it. And it just broke my heart to hear about Dean's school experience. I have always contended that Dean is smart, and this explains why he didn't do well in school.
And despite my reservations about OCs, I really did like Caleb in this too. I liked that he was there for the boys, that he made sure Dean had some things to make his life easier.
Lovely story! I love the way you do young Sam and Dean. |
 Simply Shelby 2009-01-30 . chapter 1Absolutely adorable. |
 DeanCastiel 2008-12-01 . chapter 1Woot! Aw i love this it is so adorable! I am in highschool and my favourite part of summer is back to school shopping! I love the pencil and paper aisle, i don't know why but stacks of paper make me happy! Lol Dean is smart! (i'm a Dean fan and love him) |
 Silwyna 2008-10-05 . chapter 1This was so sweet! I loved it! |
 yoyo-anarchy 2008-10-04 . chapter 1My goodness. I've spent the past week reading through your entire catalogue of works as it were, and ultimately decided against flooding your email with hundreds of reviews, but I definitely wanted to let you know how much I enjoy your writing :) I've consequently fallen in love with this universe; I read most of your work before getting to the end of season one, and was horrified by the minute glimpse at series!Caleb lol. Your Dean and Sam are just glorious; wonderful and in-character, and the life you've given to other characters, ie Caleb, is just fantastic. I have quite honestly laughed and cried, which is rare for me.
So thank you, and I bow down to you, really. And this story in particular is just beautiful. Love the references to Alf and the Ninja Turtles ;) |
 PurpleSpinx 2008-09-05 . chapter 1I almost cried while reading this story. It reminds me of so many of my students. I wish they all had a Dean or a Caleb to watch out for them. Great writing as usual! |
 wee-me 2008-09-02 . chapter 1Absolutely fabulous. I'm a sucker for both kids (especially the Winchester boys) and school supplies so this one was a definite winner for me. Wal-Mart being Dean's Disneyland was one of many favorite lines from this. |
 Scriptive 2008-08-18 . chapter 1Awesome story!
I've recently fallen in love with the Brotherhood series.
You've got me hooked (literally. I leave for college tomorrow & I haven't even packed. I've spent the last few days reading all your fics haha)
Speaking of college, you should write about Caleb's first day at College.
I'd love to know what his experiences were.
:D |
 lelann37 2008-08-12 . chapter 1oh, adorable, loved it! |
 Write-of-Passage 2008-08-12 . chapter 1I say YES! for more preseries brotherhood ones. I love the ones that have the whole gang in them Mac, Jim , John, Caleb and of course Dean and Sam. Write more please! |
 winchesterwannabe 2008-08-11 . chapter 1one word: aw! Great job! I loved it! It was very sappy, but i enjoyed it very much. ah, picturing Caleb teaching Dean how to tie his shoes and teaching Sammy the F word totally made my day! :) |
 Lilly B. 2008-08-11 . chapter 1great story! i absolutely loved it! you have a knack for taking the most common things in life and turning them into the best stories! |