Wonderfully written. Flows beautifully. Characters captured perfectly. Seems like I'm reading something written by Miller. A very creative piece of work. Keep it up!

Creative and well-written. I love it.

Wow... that was brilliant. Nice work! I really hope you got an a because your writing style blended perfectly with Arthur Miller's and you kept my attention throughout. I could see this in my mind, being performed on stage or on the silver screen. Wonderful work!

Oh! I love this. Excellent style. We just read the Crucible for school. You're extremely IC. I don't know if I imagined John actually admitting to Elizabeth that he and Abby had been together, but I like the concept. Very well done.

Wow, this is really cool! I looked through misc. novels for the crucible for like an hour, not even knowing this section was here XDXD. great job, this really makes me think, wow, cool... It's really true to Miller's stle, as well.

That is really good. That is a very well done prequel (darn I wish there were more Crucible fics! :'( the book is so sad... and the movie always makes me cry...)

Anyway *phlegms in embarrassment*

Thank you for that wonderful piece of work! Please continue in your writings!

Fearuin

Hey, this was good. In-character and everything. I wish that Abigail had gotten fucked over in the end of Crucible though, instead of poor John. :(

! I love it! I wish there were more Crucible fics *cries, begs* LoL... I can perfectly see that happening...

This was a great fic! Usually I'm fed up with anything/everything Crucible, because we're doing it in school and dragging on and on, but this was really good. What I'm impressed by is the way that you fit into Miller's style - effortlessly, it seems. Congratulations! (Can you slip into other styles so easily? Tolkien, or Rowling?) That's a wonderful gift to have, and you've definitely got it in spades!

Liana Goldenquill (can't be bothered to sign in) Also, thanks for your kind review!

That was lovely! You have Miller's language *down* so well that it felt like it could have come from the original. Very good job!

Interesting take on the unseen scene. You had everyone's characters and the language used by Miller down quite well. Good job. :)