its cute and sweet. nice composition!

That was cute! Thanks for writing! : )

Its nice to see them bond! ;)

1. I looked at him, my eyes clouded by confused.

2. I could feel a hand on my check, a thumb gently brushing my eyelids.

3. Sleep love, we all day tomorrow and I’ll be here with you all night.

1. Confused should be confusion.

2. Check should be cheek.

3. You forgot "have".

I noticed other things that could have been fixed but I'm getting tired of writing huge reviews for now and it's best for authors if they only take a little criticism from me as possible. XD

I love the story, by the way. I almost always end my reviews with a positive unless I'm still reading what all they've wrote so far. XD

Keep up the good work!

TG

how cute!

xox to Jasper!

I really like the story.

Cute story!

I want to thank you for writing that. It was a real look into the relationship between Bella and Jasper.

I enjoy these kinds of stories, where Bella and Jasper get to bond a bit - this was a very nice way to show them getting to spend some time together.

how cute!

Nicely done, I really liked it. :) It is important that Bella and Jazz are friends. :)

hi, that was a good one shot, cute and sweet.

loved how jazz and bella bonded through shoping, alice would be proud, lol.

thanks for writing

Aww, Jasper's so sweet in this story! Nice job!

TG

that was so cute

Aw, I love it!