I like that you added L hearing the bells as a mental disorder for him in this, but its a shame that it hasn't been updated in quite a while. I hope inspiration hits and you continue this.

whoa, L's past... tricky subject, good luck. the snap between what L sees and everyone else sees is a nice touch. I was thinking about the bells when I realized something. birds don't sleep at night, they sleep, just not always at night. at night, they make just as much noise. just random noticing cuz I'm part insomniac.

Poor L. Tres bon so far!

yeah, its good. i read another note, and you got BB's personality down good.

*gasp* This sounds so interesting! You've definatly caught my attention. Poor L . But that's what makes him cute .

I've read Another Note, and you seem to have his personality down pretty well. He's just an L wanna be with an evil side to him o.o"

There'll be more chapters right? Wasn't quite clear ." Keep up the great work!

Um... I couldn't exactly keep up with your story, but it was good other wise. I enjoyed it though it was hard to fallow. Please write another chapter soon (And you ment or instead of 'of'...Right?)

:) Great start. I look forward to future chapters!