Great job with this chapter :D

I LOVED THIS!! <3

Seme!Daisuke is just, wow XD

I really like your writing style! :3

ahahaha, DarkDai ftw!
Kidding, kidding, I'm not a psycho. SatoDai is the way better pairing in this situation. The poor thing...dumdum Dai. Can't have everything, doesn't he know that? -sigh- Love and all of its miseries. Nice job, dear, I especially liked the "passionate kiss mutually instigated" section. Somehow that phrase sounds very...good to the ear.

Keep it up! Writing gets harder as we get older, ne? Too much crap in real life blocking our way. But do your best!

Ja ne,
Vi

oh my god, poor sato T_T

don't forget to work on caged bird and the others!!

Very nice, killah. You're right, it certainly had a more formal feel to the writing, but it fits in with Satoshi quite well. The poor thing has to deal with unfairness just like the rest of us. -sigh- Hope life isn't screwing you over as hard as it is me so you can keep writing!

Ja ne,
Vi

I must admit, each one of your chapters and stories always has me craving for more. And this chapter is no exception. xD

Your writing always me look at my own stories and go "...ARGH I SUCK!"

Especially on my last update.

bah.

moving past my rant, i look forward to the next chapter~

-mayu

LOL!

I love chapter four.

x

OMG ;-; THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFULL... I ACTUALLY CRIED!! ;-;

Jesus, woman, stop writing so well. This was so impeccably done I'm sniffling and trying to properly finish up my homework. Why is that you always update when I'm in the midst of homework anyway? I wonder.

That was a great twist. I was guessing right up til the end. Although I'm totally sad naoz. God and his stupid door closing. But it was nice of you to make the ending a little hopeful.

Damn FFnet for cutting off my last review, by the way. I'm pretty sure I had rambled on and on and they decided just to keep the first part cause it's the most coherent. Poo.

kk, gotta get back to work. Nice job, killah-chan ^_^
Ja ne,
Vi

Ha, I'm reviewing this in the middle of a spew of homework assignments (namely Latin and Geometry). Anyway, again freaking knee-slapping hilarious. I must join in your lawlz: LAWLZ. Satoshi/Saga is such a genius crack pairing. Satoga? Sagashi? Hmm, the possibilities. I need to watch this musical. Like now. Way to subtly advertise, by the way. And if you take the lyrics into account...Dark is like Daisuke's dad. O_o Haha. Old man. Like the hinting of Dark/Dai

Aw, thanks love. This was most appreciated. Made my day even better. Now I can probably go tackle that Guardian Gates chapter... maybe xD

This chapter was hilarious. Poor Kraddy-kins. He should know better than that. Nothing ever goes his way. I mean, he's been screaming about killing Dark for what? The past 500 years? -headshake- Dork. And I knew Dai was a sadistic perv! I knew it! Haha, now to spread the news.

Glad to see more people reviewing ^_^ Keep up the genius.

Ja ne,
Vi

OMG! okay. so this has to be my favorite chapter so far! i expected it to backfire, but not like that! keep it up!

OH MY GOSH.

this is an absolutely hilarious and one of THE best fanfictions i have ever read.
i was laughing the whole way through.
i'm not even gonna bother you with WTCBS requests since all the stories you write are great.

that's one musical i've never heard of--le gasp!! i shall now youtube it. thanks!! keep writing!! and hurry up with caged bird!

omg, so hot and kawaii!! i like this--but i also miss why the caged bird sings!! it's my favourite EVER!! please update soon!