Bravo! I didn't like it either.Well Done! Now how do you get rid of that pesky hunger?

I really liked your story. And I know how you feel about the ending. All that hard work to get to the Fugue Plane to tear down the wall and you don't even get to steal ANY souls other than yours? *eye twitches* But anyways, I wish your story could have been longer and more descriptive of the destruction of the wall, but other than that I thought it was fabulous!

I like that its a lame belief for a god to spread around. I doubt all the gods would agree. The Wall is such BS, it dont handle gith. But one sword and one soul eater isn't going to destroy a god, even an idiot one.

That was... pretty good.

I like Kelemore though.

Anyway maybe more desription on the wall was teared down. The is probably big so I don't think one single swipe of your blade is going to tear it down. That's kind of Mary Suish.