I think I just died a bit there, yup.

This story was just amazing. I love how intimate they were physically, though all the same they were bantery and in character and it was just lovely! The argument at the end was priceless as well. I don't think Toph would take Haru over Sokka. ;D

Great story! It is definately a favorite. I must go reread it again now. ^^

Cheers!

Liz

Good story, nice idea, and solid writing. Just a few corrections:

1. Toph couldn't have possibly returned Ping's wink. She cannot see the wink.

2. In true Tokka fluff, Toph should have no trouble letting Sokka lead (personal opinion, please disregard)

3. I think it is a bit OOC for Toph to wear lipstick

That is all. Sorry for the personal opinion, I am much better at judging angst.

wow that was cute! nice work! a sequel would be great! :-D

xoxo

This was kind of random but very cute. :D Also sexy. ^^

aw, I love it! That's so sweet!
Toph and Sokka are so cute together...oh, I CAN'T WAIT until you guys all see PolkaDotFeather's Katara/Ang story...it's so fantastic! :)

but, yeah, this was awesome, hon! And your knowledge of dance is impeccable!

LOVIES AND BEAUTIFULLY SORE LIMBS (if you catch my drift...)


Bub'les

Wow! Great work!

Ha, this brought back memories of my own ballroom dancing experience. I wonder how many other dancers "celebrated" successfully completing a series by getting punched in the stomach? It was a blast, though I'm definitely thankful my partner was a tiny Viet girl. Keep up the good work, it's always a pleasure reading your fics.

Wow. This was really cool. Sorry the collaboration fell through but it was nice for you to do something for Tokka Week anyway. :D