It's priceless. Thanks.

Do you need a bathroom? Because your eyes are the prettiest shade of pee I’ve ever seen.

oh my god that was hilarious. i laugh so hard i snorted and my sister thinks i'm crazy. LOL.

damn that was priceless. your good!

Haha! It's very funny, especially the last one! :)

This was an amazing read, - My first Twilight fanfic.. And you have gotten me hooked! I just finished breaking dawn, and i'm pleased that I have found another Twilight fix! :-)

Incredibly well written, and I loved the daddy/daughter Fluff. Personally I love how you have put in Emmett and Jasper winding Edward up about his sex-life, it was one of the funniest bits in the book.

Really well done, it was an amazing read. Thankyou!

xx

This was so funny :)

LOL! "Prettiest shade of pee" made me crack up! These are so funny! I wouldn't mind a lemony sequel.

"You funny Lady" as Miss Swan (MAD TV) would say. I enjoyed this a lot. Also I loved your thoughts on BD and all your quotes.

That was hilarious!

How adorable! How can you not love that? "Pretiest shade of pee I've ever seen!" Just so funny!

OH MY EMMETT!Did you write the sequel?Never mind I'll find out.I LOVED IT!

Absolutely hysterical!

AWE-some

Loved it, loved it, loved it, so funny.

omg you made me laugh so hard the whole pee thing did it for me andim glad that you saved it for last..lol.. im still laughing about it anyway great fic

hillarious