ill take all thre of em

Nice WAFFy piece. As you say, present tense is a little unusual, but acceptable once in a while, when it's consistent and fits the story.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Very well done!

good story lucky harry

I love this story.

I think I love it a little more every time I read it.

I thought this was very good, I like Harry/Hermione/Luna stories. Personally I'm not really a fan of Ginny in general, but this story made her a good person, so I'm fine with it. I hope to read more stories like this in the future from you. Again, great job.

I do so enjoy your fics. All warm and fuzzy, if you know what I mean =)

A sweet and rather unexpected vignette. I can see how each of the girls has Harry's interest in mind, and it was likely either Hermione or Luna who came up with the idea of 'bundling' (and yes, I do know of the practice). Such nocturnal activities would fit in well with the social mores of the eighteenth century, which is where the wizarding world seems to be stuck.

Dumbledore's cooperation is actually expected as he is most interested in keeping his weapon well honed and oiled, but McGonagall came as a surprise. She always struck me as a bit uptight.

Ron took it well, as apparently did Molly (never the most gracious of people). I'd suspect she was planning the wedding even then.

All told, a wonderful way to go to sleep.

A nice bit of fluff. ...Alorkin

Hey there no need to lie! You coulda changed but were too lazy too... I encourage lazy-ness!

Hidy hidy,

I love Harry/Hermione/Luna. The addition of Ginny is a bit odd, but not horrible.

I personally like to think that Harry's magic should have obliterated the bundling charm, but still found it amusing. And it kept it a caring, fluffy one-shot.

Adieu,

Paladeus

Very sweet--I really liked the soft, gentle interactions between all four of them. I think you could take this story farther.

Once again a great fic. I like that you have managed to get the four all sleeping together with no sex! almost a miracle in the world of fan fiction! Not that i dislike that, but this allows a greater expression of feeling. And yes, this is VERY sappy!

Good stuff. :)