Thank you so much for updating! I'm really glad you did, It's good and thank you so much again! :)

I love this chapter and I absolutely love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Xx love it all

continue i love ur story iv read all the series and you seem to be continuing them ur talented

Omg great story dont abandon it please write the next chapter I love your writing you are a great writer. Update soon please please please

Xx sweetlyadictive

loveeeeeeeeeeee you your the best

keep writing you rock

Good chapter nineteen

Most wonderful of course. Well maybe just good. Maybe not wonderful. But possibly wonderful

THis is an amazing story! I hope that you keep writing and I am going to look up this INGO series. Awsome!

Beautiful chapter!

Great Story, love the concept. Am waiting patiently for the next chapter and to see how you finally bring Darien and Serena together, being that are from two vastly different worlds. Next chapter, please hurry

Please write more!

Please write more! I LOVE reading stories about the Ingo characters! Sadly, Helen DUnmore won't write more.

nice story, but i have a question. are they always talking in their minds cause once or twice the dialect is typed not in italize. it's kinda confusing to me. so serena can breath underwater? just a little confused. great job though and can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. i really love the darien and serena moments. it's so sweet. update soon!

Wow! Did she get hurt? or is she turning Mer? Kewl story so far.

very interesting story hope u can update soon.