I wish there was more to this trilogy, it's really good.

Nice. Very, Very, Nice. I loved the ending.
That reminds me, is Sasori a puppet, a man, or a psycho?

I knew it was a lemon the second I saw Gigi's name.XD I have talked to her once or twice on DA, and this seems like something she`d like.
I love it. ^.^

Oh my...That's all I can say right now. It's wonderfully detailed, and the plot is definately believable. I like how you made the details similar to the actual series. Some people don't do that. I'm definately going to read the sequel! :)

WRITE MORE! I really want to read more like this stories like these are rare please write some more?LOVED IT!

~Lilly~

An interesting spin on things, ;).
I certainly enjoyed many elements of it and laughed especially hard at this part;
' “Unhand me!”

“Certainly not. I have a great view of-” '
haha XD
Sasori sounds like an upper-class Eton boy! :D

~WfCP x

holy shit, he scared the hell outta me with those needles thought he was going to stick her in a sensitive area yikes!

kool

hmm...that was strange...but good ^^, and funny!

Heh heh! Orochimaru in ribbons and frills! Good one. You know I can actually SEE that! Oh yeah RLY good one shot. very...and oddly...cute. yes...cute. Ah, yes, I promised a friend I'd help her with this. So if u like Nejiten, could u check out her oneshot series. umm it's called "Sakura-Chans stories"

THNKS! Great story keep writing.

Miki-chii

please don't tell me thats it!

anyway, good job.

Thumbs up!

Sequal

And Sasori had no idea of what he was doing. That's both cute and scary at the same time.

I like it. Too bad he didn't get to use the sword, that would've been interesting. I'm wondering what would happen if he came back a few weeks later and DID use the sword [and various other weapons]. Maybe there'll be a sequal. . .? I can only hope. [Maybe, please?!]