Deep. That sad scene gave 'Doomsday' a run for its money, even if it was an enemy's death. I love the way you characterised everyone in this, and didn't just use all the dialogue. You used the high-impact lines effectively, and made a short and grim, but well-written piece.

gODSPEED!

(P.S. Even so, I reckon a future production team will eventually resurrect the Master using that scene with the ring as a base.)

Well written. It was definately in character and it didn't fail.

That was pretty good. You definitely got the characters right - I don't know what you're fretting about.

Awe poor Doctor. I didn't like this scene in the series and you've managed to make it more upsetting by giving me his thoughts behind it.