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Uchiha-Kirara
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
aww, that's such a cute oneshot!
which chapter was the one where Ed pulled at Winry's hair?
I never ever watched FA...I only know that there are Winry, Ed and Al...
hmm..
Did Winry and Ed get together? x3
I liked those two as a pairing even without watching the anime xD
Shingmei
2009-10-28 . chapter 20
Aws, so cute~ Haha, I love Edward being a father/father to be (again) and worrying about Winry~ Haha, sure sure Edward, it;s not 'Anxiety'. :)

Ahh, Father and Son conversation at the end was awsome, I can soo imagine Edward and his son...

Lucky I remember to check again on the story~ Or else i would have missed a great chapter~ :)

<3 Shingmei
goddess-training
2009-10-27 . chapter 20
That was os cute and I loved THE part about ed havin milk...
Keep up the great work!!
Mizuki's Star
2009-10-24 . chapter 20
Aw, a frantic soon-to-be-father-again Edward freaking out is pretty cute. LOL! I love the conversation between Al and Pinako was hilarious!
Aosugiru Sora
2009-10-24 . chapter 20
Aww, really cute. I loved it. ^^ Ed was soo not having an anxiety attack. ;D
Miss Woodford
2009-10-24 . chapter 20
This was very cute, I've not read a lot of "Winry is in labor and Ed is freaking out" stories. Well, there is "Nico's Birthday" by Serif; and I have an as yet unpublished story (same old story: beta is in college and studying comes first) on the same subject. Good work with characterizations and the narrative voice.
Shingmei
2009-10-24 . chapter 20
Heys, I was just wondering if you post the wrong thing onto the chapter? Cuz I thought this is a EdxWin Drabbles? and that in the summary, it said something about Ed and Winry, but in this chapter, I think it's about Roy and Riza insted?

Anyways, <3 Shingmei
Maeratica 15
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
what chapter was that again?
helloz1212
2009-08-18 . chapter 2
lmao on the last part
Mizuki's Star
2009-08-15 . chapter 19
That was cute! I laughed the part where poor Ed and Al were kicked out the house.
goddess-training
2009-08-15 . chapter 19
Aw...that was so cute...I might be pretty far off but did Winry get her 'monthly visitor'?
I am so glad you updated today!Belive it or not I was thinking its been a while since Lycoris Calantha updated...I was thinking about it when a Roy/Riza and Edwin part came up in the new 'Full Metal Alchemist Brotherhood' series on tv...its viewd in Japanese with english subtitles here in India on Animax...coz its released at the same time time in Japan!!Its the anime based COMPLETELY on the manga...so its pretty accurate and stuff...and actually very nice...Have you seen it?
Keep up the great work!
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
2009-07-06 . chapter 18
i truly love all your stories...i hope to hear more from you soon! great job!^^
goddess-training
2009-07-01 . chapter 18
aww.kAWAII!
kEEP uPDATING
Aosugiru Sora
2009-06-30 . chapter 18
Very nice work. I especially loved the last paragraph at the end. ^_^
I, too, was dissapointed with CoS. But hopefully the second anime series (which follows the manga storyline) will be much better. :)
Manhattan-y
2009-06-30 . chapter 18
Aww! That's so sweet. It made me smile :) I hated CoS to. At the end, I just started screaming, and didn't stop until my brother told me to shut up. Meh.
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