 devilYuki 2009-08-01 . chapter 1I love it!
Even if Kairi is a bit ooc, Sora is just so cute when he accidently felt Kairi's-- erm. |
 dearlybelovedangel 2009-04-24 . chapter 1ahha this was so funny XD really well written ^^ h overreacting kairi is scary lol plz update soon! |
 EggrollPerson 2009-04-16 . chapter 1great start. i hope you update soon, even though you're on hiatus... so then um... update when you're not on hiatus? idk.
- From the Weirdo That Always Reviews |
 Lebrezie 2008-10-12 . chapter 1oh i didn't realize it was an intro chapter, although it worked fine as one.
and i think it was a good length...plus you introduced all the main characters...unless, you have Namine and Roxas to add (which i would love)
tehe
i love Namine and Roxas a lot.
anyway, i knew something like that was going to happen...but here is the thing...what type of person is Sora...
is he you know going to try to apologize to her, by hanging up posters and such...or is he going to stutter when she walks up to him scowling.
hm...well i am looking forward to it.
UPDATE SOON!
BYE! :) |
 Monster Mads 2008-09-06 . chapter 1Update soon! I want them to talk :P and i really wanna see what happens next! |
 Lydia-hime 2008-08-31 . chapter 1Haha wow... Poor headphones boy. It was just an accident...
Yay! I'm happy for a new story from you. Super excited!! Good luck with this one! |
 uchihakiriko 2008-08-27 . chapter 1PERVERT!
Just kidding.
Awesome intro chapter!! I would LOVE to see the rest of this story~
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! hehe.. |
 Chulo Cholo 2008-08-17 . chapter 1sounds like a nice story |
 crystalnami 2008-08-16 . chapter 1Yay, I'm glad you started a Sokai ^^ Looking good so far, keep it up! :] Update soon! |
 Craxuan 2008-08-10 . chapter 1Really good. I like it. |
 chasingfireflies 2008-08-09 . chapter 1ahhahahaha...
that one had me laughing.
it was good.
so you update soon, right?
otherwise there's an army of sea urchins at my disposal
(basically, i'm insane, it's chapter 1 and you can already tell)
hm...
probably best not to ask...
hehe.
so, yesh, update soon! |
 twilight star16 2008-08-09 . chapter 1of course you didn't lose your touch! can't wait until you update :D |
 angelofsweetness 2008-08-09 . chapter 1AH!
Such a cute and funny first chapter.
I think you wrote it really well.
=D
Poor Sora. Getting slapped and called a pervert with people watching would be so embarassing! Haha!
Great chappie!
Update soon!
-angie-chan |
 lemonadeskies 2008-08-08 . chapter 1Ah, absolutely perfect for a first chapter! ^^
I'm not the biggest fan of Sora & Kairi but I just HAD to check this one out since your writing is always amazing. I think I might start to fall in love with this couple all over again. ^_^;
Until chapter 2! :D
RFL |
 Annie Mae 2008-08-08 . chapter 1hiya! :D
great story! :D I didn't think that the first chapter sucked.. it was quite good, actually. :D can't wait for the next chapter! ^^ |