A great story, easy to understand for non native-speaker !
That's really brilliant !

I hope the following chapter wil lbe published soon !
Have a nice day !

Very nice read!

Awesome- Keep Writing!

Neat chapter--I'm glad Albus isn't quite insane enough to try to fool Grindelwald and risk his own soul. He does have responsibilities now.

I'm also happy that Tom is doing so well. He's making real friends, working out problems with other people well, and realizing that even firsties like Samantha Maylee have feelings. He is finding good compromises to help her get the information she needs without going nuts trying to answer all her questions.

great story

Wow, I really like this story. It's really interesting to see your take on what might have happened if Dumbledore had taken more of an interest in Tom and decided to actively do something, instead of just "watching him".
Please update soon.
Thanks,
Izzi

I've always wondered...
This story is excellent, of course, even I'd be uncomfortable with a Albus Dumbledore hugging me, let alone Tom, but I suppose it is natural for Father-Son just not so quickly. I think things are moving a little fast in that aspect.
On Aberforth and Horace, they don't seem to be that close to Albus in canon, but then again, Albus couldn't have been all alone, could he?
The muggle born girl reminds me distinctively of Hermione, and I also get an attraction to Alastor here.
Things are heating up with the war, and I'm curious as to see what Grindelward will do next. Please update soon.
x Smaginn

This is so great! I love that Tom's given a chance for a real parent.

I'm really enjoying this story - the depiction of Dumbledore's actions and the ones in the Muggle world, as well as Tom's personality is fascinating.

A really enjoyable story with wonderful characterisation. I do like that Dumbledore and Tom have to build their relationship - complete with setbacks - unlike some stories which have them magically instanteously bonding the minute Dumbledore gives Tom the tiniest bit of attention. Am looking forward to reading more

Well, I am thoroughly enjoying this story! I've been searching for a story like this for a while, you know, and now that I've found one I'm so glad that it's turned out exactly the way I'd hoped it would. Well done!!

Please keep writing, and I hope you are able to update soon!

Cheers,
~ Estora ~

Finally a story with logic...not all 11 year olds are miniature Dark Lords!
Great job:)

I enjoy your story and hope to see it updated soon. The interactions between Dumbledore and Tom was informative of Tom's change in attitude. Like the way they are portrayed here.

this is most interesting adwancement I have seen.
really a troubled but a treasure soul young tom is.

looking forward to your new update~

I really liked this story. Thank you for writing it.