Great story, very original, Yachiru is my second favorite character (Kenpachi is the first).oh!, and your english is as perfect as my spanish (is my first language)See ya and BWAHAHAHA!

yay! wonderful.. XD

heheheh...I love this kind of stories.

Haha, this made me smile. You captured Byakuya's reaction perfectly! Well done :)

Oh god, I just fell in love with this pairing. x33

lol funny

AWw it was great arigato!

Haha, this was so cute and funny! And yes, Byakuya really is doomed. I loved Rukia's reaction to seeing them, too. Keep writing!
-taoT