|Reviews for Broken Road|
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 14
I know you warned me-us- your readers, but jumpin gee whiz,Jarrett is a freakin' dead man an I don't mean as in undertaker,either. Don't want Mark in jail, but Jarrett needs to be hurt SEVERELY! An I do believe Taker is gonna do it,somehow legally. But however it happens,its deserved,bad enough to lie to her,that Mark sent him,but then to turn around an beat her like a dog,ooohhhh,I'm so ticked off at Jarrett just ' off the soapbox now.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 13
He has GOT to leave Jodi-Lynn,GOT TO x's like 10,000. She goona slip up somewhere an lose him. She deserves GONE, like Ally deserves Mark an he deserves her. I'll get off my soapbox now. 'Nuff said.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 12
Sleep saved th' girl,this time. Like I said there is fixin' t' be a war of epic proportions here, I just don't want Ally hurt by anybody an that includes himself.I get protective over characters I like,an I like Ally.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 11
I'm sensing trouble here,either there's gonna be a humongous fight tween kev an Scott, or Kev an Mark or Scott an Mark an somewhere in all this mess Ally is gonna get hurt. I knew Jodi-Lynn was up to something,she gonna fooey an fall back in it,too. There will come a time that she wants Mark an he gonna tell her no,go take a long walk off a short pier an get over it, I hope.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 10
Again, not wild about th' slash,but it is done in a tasteful manner,which I appreciate. Mark shouldn't be so pissed at Ally,until he knowa the situation an circumstances,I mean he's not exactly Mr. Faithful to her is he? I know ,I can just about feel it Jodi-Kynn is up to something, an Mark is gonna be Major hurt by it,but if he hurts Ally too much,he's liable to lose her too an then where will he be?
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 9
While not into the slash stuff,tell me this is not gonna wind up a threeway. I don't think Mark would approve. Plus,why do I think Jodi-Lynn is up to something,an its not a good thing? I mean when you get somebody who for the longest is mean ,not nice,an all an suddenly she starts being nice,I see a BIG red flag of warning and all sorts of warnings start yelling in my brain.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 8
Asidefrom the occasional rough sex an the domination aspect this is pretty much a normal story.I love it,the tatt she got of his name an well,just everything;okay maybe here an there a misspelled word, but long as I can figure out th' word no biggie. I love how he so openly trusts -Lynn is just dumb for being such an ass when it comes to him.I mean if she was doin' th'wifely thing like she should,he wouldn't have gone lookin','course there wouldn't have been much of a story,but you know what I'm gettin' at,don't you? Anyways,story-wise,we're good.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 7
How Jodi-Lynn could run him off is beyond in some ways this is sweet,th' two of , he needs to understand in here,somewhere that she is thrilled to see him, whenever he shows up.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 6
Oh,pooh,I was hoping he'd kick,bio-dad's butt,just on general priniple,oh well,maybe next time.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 5
Not one's usual Mark,granted,but so far nothing I can't handle an Jodi-Lynn,to turn him down,woman is absitively/posolutelyNUTZ! But I am glad he cleared up her fears,an I love the "safe" word-care bear(s),that's cute.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 4
This should be interesting-bio-daddy potentially meetingSexual-Daddy.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 3
Only one word fits here. YUM!
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 2
She'd be out of he little mind if she didn' is a side of Mark,I've only partially thought our minds tend to travel in the same pack,this could be fun or it could br bad? I choose FUN.
| takerfan925 11/14/10 . chapter 1
I'm a bit of a quandry,that I'll let you guess,but I won't Road starts out fine as frog hair split 4ways down the middle.I like!
| SnapePotionsMistress 9/12/10 . chapter 1
I like how you make Mark out like a big
bad boy who loves to dominate but I'm
sure you will bring in the teddy bear,
huh? It's tiring after awhile of
reading stories where Mark is like
nothing but a bid old cuddly teddy bear.
Keep up the good work.