I loved this story! It was so nice to see some great interaction between Edward and Nessie and it seemed like something that could have really fit into Breaking Dawn. It would be great to see this kind of moment on screen!

I'm continuing to hope that you'll do the wedding ceremony and honeymoon from Edward's POV...!

So funny ... and sweet :)

I don't know why i'm not sure i want to know what the collar and leash were used for before.

You did great job with this story. It was very touching and a great ending, very funny.

"Blondie grimaced, and the dirty look she shot me warmed my heart"

That takes me back to Twilight's "Here is your veggie plate Steph".

Way to cameo Blondie!

Aw, Jake and Nessie... I almost don't want to alert Chris Hansen, Almost. So sweet.

This was simply the sweetest story I've ever read!

loved it ... what a sweet sweet look at family time :)

Other than the fact I can't stand Jake this was a very touching story! Edward is my favourite character and to see him in the role of father is very touching and I think you did a superb job of it.

I have always been disappointed to see Nessie neglect by fan fiction writers or only picking up her story after she has matured or is about to to begin a relationship with Jacob. So little is written about her relationship within the Cullen family as she grew and matured. Thanks for this small insight!

Wow. I've read and reread this story I don't know how many times and I just noticed something. I always assumed that this took place sometime after Alice's vision about the Volturi but before they actually arrive. In that case, Jasper wouldn't be around to help Bella train. I can't believe I missed that!

I hope that doesn't come off as a criticism, because this is one of my favorites of your stories (even though I love them all!). There is not nearly enough father-daughter bonding time in the book, and only a couple snippets of Jake-Nessie time. You should write more Jake POV in the future. Great job.

Love the father-daughter bonding. It's great.

love it

ahh, that was so sweet-I half expected Nessie to play the piano in Breaking Dawn somewhere.

This was a great story. :) The technical part was perfect and the plot was amazing - enough humour and perfect amount of fluff. :) It looked like something Stephenie Meyer would've written. ;) The story was exactly something she could've written. :) Simply perfect!

All the best,

Maria :)

This is wonderful, and your characterizations are spot on! Perfect. :)

aw i miss renesmee. I think i will read Breaking Dawn again. Its in my bag. Anyway I loved this. it really showe how Jacob feels; not completely but good. I liked the vocabulary; it wasnt old fashion like edwards. true to jacobs character. that was great. but the bond between edward and nessie was just so amazing. i want to cry it was so beautiful. i did hope bella would come into the scene but it was great all the same. I am proud of jacob even though it wasnt his fauly hes so tolerant. its the imprinting. but its all good. anyway i loved it. your amazing; as if i couldnt say it enough.