Wonderful

The scences that you described was very fitting. Enough to keep you interested but not over the top. Well written. Thanks for expanding on Breaking Dawn where I felt needed more "fluff". Love your insight into Breaking Dawn and what you despised. Very Honest. Loved it.

Thanks again.

WOW! Just wow!

Wow...I loved that it was hot but not smutty. I loved his reaction to the bathing suit.

What's the ripping noise and the feel of powderry soft?

totally agree with you that stephanie missed the sex scenes lol I mean Im not one of those that like reading rated scenes but this I wouldn't of minded as long as she didnt do it too explicit but yeah I was disappointed that there was no sex scene in BD and I gotta say that that book was my favorite,and your profile makes a good point as to why people wouldnt like BD, but I totally liked the outcome of it, but dreaded reading JPOV until i read it...then Eclipse was awesome!! but I liked what you just created for me and filled in the blanks lol good job and I love it! it wasnt too explicit to endure so keep up the good work ;)
xoxo Tiny

Wow, some hot lemons! Why have you stopped writing? I wish you had continued, I would have liked to read what else you could spin. Thanks, and I'll have you on alert :)

If possible, chapter 2 was even better than chapter 1! Excellent!

wow, that was the best first time scene I've read! Amazing!

Holy shit...that was hot! More please!

Oh my God! This was so good. Extremely well written. Very sensuel but not to 'dirty'. Really capturing the characters as portrayed by Stephenie Meyer. Really good, thank you. It's like finding a very important piece of a puzzle.

Once again beatiful chapter, so hot and sweet, and good mix. I haven't read a BD honeymoon story inforever and this just brought me right back into that story and how much fun it is to read the missing parts. I so wish you would continue!!

I just found this story and I loved it so much I read chapter one and went straight into chapter 2 without reviewing...and then I flew through that chapter to discover you stopped writing a year ago. =/ Sad day. Why did you stop!? This is beautiful! You write Edward so well! I honestly believe these thoughts oculd be his! I wish you'd continue this!!

This is very, very good, the kind of thing I would have wanted to read in the books. Hoping for an update soon!

love it :) haha and just a quick fyi... its been quite some time since uve updated... haha update soon!