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2008-08-20 . chapter 1
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Kyra4
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Okay, so I'll level with you: it was TOTALLY Draco I saw! ;o) That's probably because I didn't even look at the pairing until I was halfway through the ficlet so right from the beginning I was seeing Draco stumbling through the desert because that's where my mind always goes (i.e. to Draco) unless it's pointed in a different direction from the start.

And I was digging it because all of a sudden I seem to be back on a nice little knock-Draco-around binge, if you will. I think it's Cold Comfort that did it to me - I'm sorry but Draco dying is just hot. Well, YOU probably wouldn't give him a hot death; you'd probably make it exceedingly undignified and disgusting just to piss me off.

Okay, back on topic: THIS FIC. So then when I'm about halfway through I flicked my eyes up and saw the Severus / Hermione pairing (which in retrospect I really should have KNOWN, I mean duh) so I was like, OH, okay, so it's Snape. And for a while that's who I saw. And then by the end, it was Draco again.

SORRY!!

I can't help myself. Although I've just started reading Twilight (set right here in WA yay!) and oh CRAP, Edward is hotter than Draco. NOW what do I do?

I'm seriously in a bind here.

But anyway, what an intense little fic. It's a really compelling notion, someone dead and sorta caught in an endless repeating loop due to unfinished business he apparently left behind (the business of being in love... Aw!)

Nicely and compellingly executed!
notwritten
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
Thank you for sharing it. Have a wonderful weekend. Keep smiling. :-) Update please.
lvswtht
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
Wow, so intense and angsty. It's really good.
amsev
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
Very nice one shot -- The song works perfectly with it. I do hope he finds her again some day.
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