 AEthereal Devastation 2009-10-20 . chapter 14A good story. Now get around to the fight. Thanks! |
 Knight25 2009-10-15 . chapter 14Good story! Continue soon. |
 prophet144 2009-07-12 . chapter 14Don't know where your friend got the idea of basically using filler chapters, but they sometimes put more people off of a story than they keep interested. Just let everyone know what is going on and that you're working on the next chapter. Keep the chapters related to the story. Otherwise, your readers are more likely to desert you than wait for life to slow down a bit so you can continue on with your writing endeavors. |
 prophet144 2009-07-12 . chapter 8I like the idea and story so far, but you've got a couple of usage errors.
1) It's not wearied: it's worried
2) It wouldn't be She was freaky out... it would be she was freaking out
3) The word is Until... not In till... it's Until then... |
 hewhoreaps 2009-07-10 . chapter 14Well I look forward to a update even if its kinda of filler or things Kim and Tommy remember doing over the course of the years since they last saw each other. |
 sernity1806 2009-02-06 . chapter 13This is so different it is good. |
 ditena 2009-01-06 . chapter 13Three chapters in a day! That was kind of you!
Nice chapters, though still they have some grammar mistakes. You really need to work on your grammar!
Let's hope Zordon and Alpha find out who the black ranger really is. That would be awesome! Update asap! |
 Be A Warrior Casseau 2009-01-05 . chapter 13Enjoying the story very much! I really hope Tommy comes face to face with himself--that'd be a great conversation to read! Please update! |
 hewhoreaps 2009-01-05 . chapter 13Well things are about to get a lot more interesting for the rnagers.
I think Zedd's monster is going to be bigger problem then Phantom Stinger |
 hewhoreaps 2009-01-05 . chapter 12Well even though he is not talking Tommy has managed to still tip off Zordon and Alpha that he knows more then the other Dino Thunder Rangers. |
 RomanticLamb 2009-01-05 . chapter 13WOOT Three chapters, thanks for updating. I can't wait for more. Are the DT rangers going to meet the Ninjetti rangers (well the real identities) and what not... |
 hewhoreaps 2009-01-05 . chapter 11One would think that Zordon would have scanners inside the command center after the whole mess with the Green Ranger trashing it, though I guess that would not make a lot of sense since said Green Ranger did teleport in.
Well I get the feeling there is going to be a few surpises in the near future |
 RomanticLamb 2009-01-04 . chapter 10That was nice and long. I can't wait for more. Please update soon. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-11-27 . chapter 8Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2008-11-27 . chapter 7Great work. |