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AEthereal Devastation
2009-10-20 . chapter 14
A good story. Now get around to the fight. Thanks!
Knight25
2009-10-15 . chapter 14
Good story! Continue soon.
prophet144
2009-07-12 . chapter 14
Don't know where your friend got the idea of basically using filler chapters, but they sometimes put more people off of a story than they keep interested. Just let everyone know what is going on and that you're working on the next chapter. Keep the chapters related to the story. Otherwise, your readers are more likely to desert you than wait for life to slow down a bit so you can continue on with your writing endeavors.
prophet144
2009-07-12 . chapter 8
I like the idea and story so far, but you've got a couple of usage errors.

1) It's not wearied: it's worried
2) It wouldn't be She was freaky out... it would be she was freaking out
3) The word is Until... not In till... it's Until then...
hewhoreaps
2009-07-10 . chapter 14
Well I look forward to a update even if its kinda of filler or things Kim and Tommy remember doing over the course of the years since they last saw each other.
sernity1806
2009-02-06 . chapter 13
This is so different it is good.
ditena
2009-01-06 . chapter 13
Three chapters in a day! That was kind of you!

Nice chapters, though still they have some grammar mistakes. You really need to work on your grammar!

Let's hope Zordon and Alpha find out who the black ranger really is. That would be awesome! Update asap!
Be A Warrior Casseau
2009-01-05 . chapter 13
Enjoying the story very much! I really hope Tommy comes face to face with himself--that'd be a great conversation to read! Please update!
hewhoreaps
2009-01-05 . chapter 13
Well things are about to get a lot more interesting for the rnagers.

I think Zedd's monster is going to be bigger problem then Phantom Stinger
hewhoreaps
2009-01-05 . chapter 12
Well even though he is not talking Tommy has managed to still tip off Zordon and Alpha that he knows more then the other Dino Thunder Rangers.
RomanticLamb
2009-01-05 . chapter 13
WOOT Three chapters, thanks for updating. I can't wait for more. Are the DT rangers going to meet the Ninjetti rangers (well the real identities) and what not...
hewhoreaps
2009-01-05 . chapter 11
One would think that Zordon would have scanners inside the command center after the whole mess with the Green Ranger trashing it, though I guess that would not make a lot of sense since said Green Ranger did teleport in.

Well I get the feeling there is going to be a few surpises in the near future
RomanticLamb
2009-01-04 . chapter 10
That was nice and long. I can't wait for more. Please update soon.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-11-27 . chapter 8
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2008-11-27 . chapter 7
Great work.
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