I've got two things to tell you (and really hope you'll take this in the right way).

1) Good chapter in the overall.

2) Did you have a beta reader already? As for what I read, you still don't. Please get some for the story's sake! It has potential, but you keep confusing me *and I guess others too* when you don't decide what word applies to a sentence. You don't have to say ' Whatever Elsa and that monster did to them was so intense that…" Hayley said ask she trailed off.' With said OR asked would be perfect!

I'm not asking perfection, but THAT sentence shows me you didn't even proofread your own story! I'd love to see more of it but please, BEFORE posting, proofread, then ask other author to proofread it for you in case you missed something. Don't trust your instincts while proofreading!

Snicker. Have this vision of Black!Tommy confronting Zedd. Pointing out that he is all grown up before morphing. As if one Tommy isn't enough trouble for the bad guys.

Well Hayley is going to be busy for a bit I'm sure. However you might note readers need to go back to a earlier chapter for information on Kiki.

Well wonder what if anything the rangers do in the past will effect Hayley and Kiki's present

A good story. Now get around to the fight. Thanks!

Good story! Continue soon.

Don't know where your friend got the idea of basically using filler chapters, but they sometimes put more people off of a story than they keep interested. Just let everyone know what is going on and that you're working on the next chapter. Keep the chapters related to the story. Otherwise, your readers are more likely to desert you than wait for life to slow down a bit so you can continue on with your writing endeavors.

I like the idea and story so far, but you've got a couple of usage errors.

1) It's not wearied: it's worried

2) It wouldn't be She was freaky out... it would be she was freaking out

3) The word is Until... not In till... it's Until then...

Well I look forward to a update even if its kinda of filler or things Kim and Tommy remember doing over the course of the years since they last saw each other.

This is so different it is good.

Three chapters in a day! That was kind of you!

Nice chapters, though still they have some grammar mistakes. You really need to work on your grammar!

Let's hope Zordon and Alpha find out who the black ranger really is. That would be awesome! Update asap!

Enjoying the story very much! I really hope Tommy comes face to face with himself-that'd be a great conversation to read! Please update!

Well things are about to get a lot more interesting for the rnagers.

I think Zedd's monster is going to be bigger problem then Phantom Stinger

Well even though he is not talking Tommy has managed to still tip off Zordon and Alpha that he knows more then the other Dino Thunder Rangers.

WOOT Three chapters, thanks for updating. I can't wait for more. Are the DT rangers going to meet the Ninjetti rangers (well the real identities) and what not...

One would think that Zordon would have scanners inside the command center after the whole mess with the Green Ranger trashing it, though I guess that would not make a lot of sense since said Green Ranger did teleport in.

Well I get the feeling there is going to be a few surpises in the near future