oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! UPDATE SOON!

When they say "Clear!" they mean that nobody should be touching the patient or they'll get shocked too.

Don't tell me Shawn dies! I will cry! I love Shawn Spencer, and I don't think he deserves to die!

Aside from that little rant of mine, Please Post More Soon. It is an awesome story, and very well written! I have to say, I don't think even I could do better, even though I'm a total Psych-o at the moment.

RoyEd Fangirl

UPDATE PLAESE!

Do you know why they say "clear"? It's because if, like Jules, someone is holding onto the patient's body in any way, the shock will stop their heart. Heck, the shock stops the patient's heart because it's beating too fast, and it's meant to start again.

Just pointing it out.

Cool fic.

Gwid

ok Im totally freaked! What's gonna happen shawn and gus? Update soon plz!

Bubbles

Oh no! Shawn, LIVE! Great story so far, and I cant wait to see whats next!

I like this story...though I'm pretty sure you can't hold someone's hand while they're getting shocked...but other than that, great chapter!

I liked the hallucination bit, it was very...real, in a dream sort of way if that makes sense. I'm not sure it does, but I know what I mean...

Please let Shawn be ok!

Update soon.

-Kimly

Wow! It's good. Though I wondered what's happened to Gus, and why was there someone behind a tree watching him. Maybe It's just me getting too far ahead of myself but I'd definately like to find out more. Don't keep us waiting too long? Please?

Bubbles

where's gus! He'd better be alive! Anyways, wasn't as cliched as you think. I mean it's hard not to have an original hospital scene and you pulled it off fine. I'm really anxious to know where gus is though! And you should definetly include some man tears over each otehr or atleast some serious Gus guilt/worrying

aw sweet! I'm all about Shawn's only weak point being that he's in love with his best friend, definetly the best kind of ShawnxGus fics. Nicely written, maybe a little rushed but overall very nice. I'm really glad you didn't have them sleep togethor immediately cos that bothers me sometimes unless it's written really really well...

Liz

Update soon!

And from what I know (I'm not a doctor, but my little brother did have pneumonia once) you have it spot on so far. :)

-Kimly

I don't normally read Shawn/Gus - I'm usually too much of a Shules fan, but this fic caught my eye and its holding it...

-goes to read more-

-Kimly

great scene, I could actually see it.

great job, hope there's more to this story, I'll surely be back when the next installment is up. Don't let us hang to long...