This is really nice, not most authors can portray an angst emotion with just a few paragraphs. I wish you could expand this, it'll probably bring a lot more emotion to it.

I like how the lines were arranged and the realization behind it. to be quite honest, I feel like that almost all the time. It's sad, I know. That's why I can relate to this.

I wish you'd consider expanding it.

Or something about Edward's feelings. I'm sure it's going to be filled with angst, too.

I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing it :)

the weird thing is that is exactly how i feel most of the time

I like this story line so much I wish you would expand it, dramatically. Guess it's just the overwhelming angst, but it's so difficult to write well that even SM didn't explore that. She effectively just left the pages blank!

I think that you could develop that time period and do it justice. That is probably the highest compliment I have paid to an author.

Hey i love all your work that i have read, I'm in the prosses of reading them all. I think you should write a smut with Bella/Emmett. Now that would be really hott

Katie

omg, that was sad, u are truly an amazing writer

How you can express so deep emotions with only a few words is amazing! I almost cried...

It made me shiver. Wonderfully dark.

Sad. I enjoy your writing.

wow! That was awesome :)

I was close to tears.

Even with so few words it has such deep meaning.

I'm having the same feeling today. [

This was very deep and emotional for so few words. Just so you know, the whole world doesn't hate you, especially your fans that adore your fanfictions... and I am no exception.

DiamondSkin

Oh my goodness. Wonderful, short but fully impacting.

This sounds like it was from Edwards POV, but I have a question for you.

Would you mind if I, giving credit of course, used this for a monologue in an advanced acting class?

It's just one of those pieces that has all of the moments for beats, and an overall amazingly dark tone.

Regardless, lovely work (as always).