:DDDDDDD OMR THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT! :D

Awh! Love it; well planned out, fluffy, I liked the change in POV's!

Thanks!

YAY! finally. Wow. aw...

*HQJ sitting in front of her laptop with a strange expression on her face*very swet...

Oh, I love it!Rock on!

3

HQJ

posotutley adorable!

Nice! Really excellent!

Juliet

BEAUTIFUL!

WONDERFUL!

SO PERFECT!

MOONYPADFOOT4EVER!

aw! so cute and fluffy!

i love how that played out!

You ahndled the thoughts and changing POVs really really well!

Love it!

They are totally adorable.

i havn't actually read a SiriusLupin before, i usually stick to HarryDraco, but this was excellent-i might just go read a few more! ;p

Limit

great fic! *is waving a wolfstar flag* nice one shot and hope to c more from u soon! -

After reading the other fic, I thought I had to go and chech your profile and, oh joy!, you're writing my two favourtie couples! :D So I went for this one and it was great! The conversation was constructed incredibly good. And I didn't think Lily was OOC or anything (you seemed to think that you had written her badly). I don't know if english if your native language (not mine), but you made the mistake of writing 'your' instead of 'you're' lots of times. 'your' means it's your something, 'you're' simply means 'you are'

Wonderful. I really really like this. I like how you see the experience from both sides. :]

xx

That was really sweet! It was one of the best SB/RL one shots that I've read!

Great!

aw!

that was WONDERFUL!

i LURVED it!

ok, i'm off to read your other fics...lol

:)

Aside from the spelling issues, that was FANTASTIC and I truly adored it! Well done for writing it so well and cleverly! It was fabulous!

x Cazzy x

aww, so cute! and i like lily: 'it's woman's intuition, jmaes, just trust me.' (giggling)

hon, it's fluff. angsty fluff. but fluff. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but anything that's cutesy and ends with both kissing and declaring their love to one another classifies as fluff. and i thuroughly enjoyed it. so keep writing! ::huggles::