 One man geek squad 2009-12-27 . chapter 2Hmm. You asked for a helpful idea. Possibly put in an angel attack, with shinji and rei in their respective roles as servant and master. |
 ODST Recruit 2009-12-12 . chapter 2I never watched this anime all that much, but I can easily see this happening. This story is so funny! I was laughing so hard I almost blacked out. |
 Iwannabeahero 2009-11-28 . chapter 2Now I really like this one. Especially when Rei bluffed Asuka. I also enjoyed the omakes you created. I wonder what kind of adventure Miss Rei and Shinji will have in this story. |
 Anomynous 2009-11-26 . chapter 2 Roughly $104,0 translates, using Australian currency and local prices of $20 a case, to 5200 CASES of beer in a month, since in most contracts I am aware of treat a month as 30 standard days, that translates to 173 and 1/3 cases a DAY! Damn that's a bad drinking habit. If Misato has 8 Hours of sleep, 8 of work and thus 8 of pure drinking she had to drink 22 Cases an hour. Of course this would rapidly lead to ruptured organs and system failure, primarily the liver. Logical conclusion, Misato was somehow infected by Adam in the 2nd Impact, leading to her developing a pseudo S2 organ that runs off beer. This in turn dictates she has just received a mass of power, so she just might be able to survive Gendo Ikari until that power runs out. Statement closed, oh and good story idea, but a little too early to really comment on how good the fic is going to be |
 patleon909 2009-11-15 . chapter 2Amusing story you have here. Even though Shinji isn't really Rei's slave, it'll be interesting to see her use that power if she gets mad at him xD Great job and I hope you update soon =3 |
 bubbleduckie 2009-10-06 . chapter 1Funny story, really! I wish it was longer! |
 Darkangel665 2009-10-03 . chapter 2Very good story but please update can't wait for the next chapter! |
 TharzZzDunN 2009-09-26 . chapter 2Just a suggestion but if you want to keep the humor element of 10,0,0 yen, it would work better to stop shooting holes in the plot by scaling down the value by converting it into dollars.
By converting it into dollars you stab reality into a humor story, which is counter productive to making anyone laugh at your writing.
Just as an example, any company with more than 400 employees spends more than 100,0 dollars on paper products alone! So you can see it gets significantly tiresome to see an authors note dragging mud into the middle of a story, unless it was written in a humorous way.
Actually liked this, just thought you might take note. |
 skybluescramble 2009-09-08 . chapter 2 LOVE IT ! :D |
 daniel 29 2009-08-30 . chapter 1A cute master/slave story at least this my impression |
 Silo666 2009-08-23 . chapter 2it is turning out good hope to see an update soon |
 gone119 2009-08-10 . chapter 2Great story! |
 LbcLostKid 2009-06-20 . chapter 2Excellent chapter. |
 gaiawolf 2009-06-18 . chapter 2IT WAS UPDATED!! YES!
good work, I really liked the first chapter, and the second one was only better.
kudos to you, and keep updating! |
 NewFLavor4UrEars 2009-06-18 . chapter 2i suppose if u wanted to continue on with this story you could always just follow the main storyline and then just adlib watever jokes pop into your head! but it was rele funny so keep going ha ha |