oh I wonder what sora is going to say when he sees cloud. please update soon!

Aw! Cloud finally shows up. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Poor thing. Stupid writers block is a bummer. x.x

I think you portrayed Cloud just fine. I love your writing style also! ^^ And I can't wait to see what Sora does whenever he sees Cloud. xD Please update ASAP!!

Peace and Love!

<3 Alice

This is a unique story, when I read the prologue, I too thought that it was a vampire story, but once I got into the rest of the story, I could tell that this was a whole different bag of chips :-). I liked how Riku kinda just appeared out of no where and follows Sora around all day like a little lemming, it was cute. Though I have to say that this story raised alot of questions for me, like why did Riku seem to accept right away in the first chapter that Sora could see him when most people couldn't see him? He asked first, who was there, but then when he realized that Sora heard him, he didn't act any different. In the last chapter he mentioned how odd it was that Sora could not only see and hear him, but also touch him. I may be just looking to hard at it, but I just thought i'd ask.
A big question is, how in the seven levels of hell did Riku get bullied and Leon get pulled down with him? I mean from what I've seen of Riku as a Ghost he seems pretty tough, and I know he has ghost abilities to back it up, but alot of times your personality still bleeds into what you do, so you aren't that different. Are we going to find out what really happened to Riku and Leon? I mean there seems like there's more to it that what happened. Oh and man those lockers at that school must be huge! Please keep updating this story. I really want to see what direction this story goes in. I really like it so far, despite all the questions lol.

Oh is the tear drop that sora bought was riku? Please update soon!

hahaha i love this please update soon!!

lol Me likes~ Though why is Tidus such an a-hole? Looking forward to more!

Awesome story i love how you wrote details
cant wait for the next chapter

Yay! xD I'm sure that whatever that is, it's halirious. Looking it up after I post this.

Yay for the update! Haha. Go Riku! -hearts- Such a nice guy...Er, ghost. Uhm...Ghost dude! xD Yeah, that's it. And poor Sora. Picked on by TWS boy.

Now, until next time; -h3@rt$-

Sora is so dumb -_-; I look forward to more!!

Whee! Update! Yikes, Riku does know lots, Sora. INTEROGATE HIM! xD Sorry, bored and hyper. Anywho, a couple grammer mistakes. Nothing huge. Great update. Until next time, -h3@rt$-

Oh is Riki the ghost? What happened to Cloud? Please update soon!

You have been forgiven!

Nice update. Whee! Makes me curious...Was the...Never mind, I'll make us all confused.

Anyway! Very good update, loved it. I shall be looking forward to more.

BTW, Merry Christmas! -hearts-

...I'm a little confused...but it was good, I liked it! Please update soon!

-poke poke- Update soon, kay? It's caught my attention. o.o;